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When your away from me do you think of things like us?
dose it take you above and beyond?
do you go back to the first time we touched, back when we made love?
i know i do.
do you think of my when your alone and when your not home?
does the thought of me take you above and beyond
to a place where we\'re togeather and i\'d hold you in my arms forever
i know i do.
do you remember the summer nights, when i\'d look into your eyes
standing under starry skyes, and we\'d kiss until the sun would rise
i know i do
but you just remember all of the hard times that got us here, now your gone
do you still miss me every single day
you know I do
when your away from me do you think of things like us?
does it take you above and beyond?
do you want to know do i still love you...
you know i do
i love this's deffinatly my fav that i wrote.
it's really sad and when i play it girls cry!
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-a-s-h- Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2003
Wow!!! That's so deep and sad you show your emotions well in this piece. :) (Smile)
theindiepunk Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2003
a tear, that was great. that was deep. good job

crazy-jane Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2003

So. good.

So good.

tieupmyhands Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2003
i really liked that.. it filled me with emotion and watery eyes, but happy eyes. hehe. great work.
xxstellarxx Featured By Owner May 10, 2003   Writer
Clap wow thats really awesome. i bet it sounds great when its played. kudos 2 you...thats going under my +fav

aint love grand?
brokensunbeam Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2003   Photographer
I really like the paralellism you used here. Tear.
holy123 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2003   Writer
oh my almost brings tears waters eyes anyway well that was really really good i love it soo much its a fave now welp gonna add it dont doubt it well loves me *~~**kayla Lick me please!
savingmysanity Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2003  Professional Photographer
God your stuff is always so deep I love it, I really like this alot. Headbang!
stealthestars Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2003
wow kenneth! that got me right here *pats my heart*

i Heart this alot
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